Task #48272

Textbook: Connection to the TYPO3 world

Added by Mathias Schreiber about 2 years ago. Updated over 1 year ago.

Status:Closed Start date:2013-05-16
Priority:Should have Due date:
Assigned To:Mathias Schreiber % Done:

80%

Category:Copytext
Target version:2) Finish Copytext

Description

Headline and copytext

Headline: Standing on the shoulders of a giant

Copy: TYPO3 Neos is the successor of the world-class CMS, TYPO3. We took the experience of more than 500.000 websites built in TYPO3 CMS and used our collective expertise to build an entirely new kind of CMS.

Idea and Reasoning

This section should emphasize the user that Neos is backed up by one of the (if not the) most widespread used Open Source CMS on the planet.
Text should promote confidence in the product.

Icon and image style

TYPO3 Logo seems legit.
Maybe we could use one of the TYPO3 group pictures from T3BOARD or T3DD in order to transport the whole "huge community" spirit.

04_Standing-on-the-shoulders-of-a-giant_LAY.jpg (303.1 kB) Claas Reimer, 2013-06-07 12:21

History

#1 Updated by Mathias Schreiber about 2 years ago

  • Subject changed from Textbook: to Textbook: Connection to the TYPO3 world

#2 Updated by Mathias Schreiber about 2 years ago

  • Status changed from New to Needs Feedback
  • Assigned To set to Rasmus Skjoldan
  • % Done changed from 0 to 80

#3 Updated by Rasmus Skjoldan about 2 years ago

Headline is perfect.

Suggestion for a small change to the copy:

"TYPO3 Neos is the successor of the world-class CMS, TYPO3. We took the experience of more than 500.000 websites built in TYPO3 CMS and used our collective expertise to make a new kind of CMS."

Note: I think it's important to stay out of talking about doing a better CMS - we don't need to compare Neos to CMS in any way. We just draw from the experience from it.

#4 Updated by Rasmus Skjoldan about 2 years ago

  • Assigned To changed from Rasmus Skjoldan to Mathias Schreiber

#5 Updated by Mathias Schreiber about 2 years ago

Made some minor changes to the last sentence to make it sound more buzzy.
All in all I'm fine with the copy.

The TYPO3 Logo could work out well, but we need to make sure we have something different for the Flow connection so we don't overuse the logo.

#6 Updated by Rasmus Skjoldan about 2 years ago

I'm fine with the copy now.

Concerning the logo we just need to use the "[shape] Neos" logo as sketched out on http://typo3.org/the-brand/the-typo3-family/

The Part of TYPO3 can be used here too in the footer.

#7 Updated by Claas Reimer about 2 years ago

Attached a layout for this section, emotional mood pic which shows the bigness with a picture of NY at night. Onepage section Nr.4.

#8 Updated by Rasmus Skjoldan about 2 years ago

Works really well to me.

#9 Updated by Mathias Schreiber almost 2 years ago

  • Category set to Copytext

#10 Updated by Mathias Schreiber almost 2 years ago

  • Target version set to 2) Finish Copytext

#11 Updated by Mathias Schreiber over 1 year ago

  • Status changed from Needs Feedback to Closed

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